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A Note on Writing and Gaming

Monday, November 7th, 2011

Skyrim comes out on the 11th. A friend of mine has preordered it for me as my Christmas present. This is incredibly awesome, and based on previous experience with games such as Morrowind and Fallout: New Vegas, I will die of starvation playing Skyrim if I’m not careful*.

The salient point is this: No Skyrim for me on any given day until I’m done writing. If you see me on Skyrim, and a quick verbal or textual interview reveals that I have not yet written, you should punch me. :)


*This happened twice on New Vegas, and possibly as many as seven times with Morrowind. My memories of that period are a bit fuzzy.

A Quick November Update

Wednesday, November 2nd, 2011

Yesterday, I didn’t get any writing done. To be fair, I was busy finding out that the fellow who pre-approved us for a home loan actually couldn’t write us a home loan. As far as I can tell this wasn’t a matter of malice, but one of incompetence. Part of me feels like that’s a bit harsh. Part of me feels like it’s a damn good thing my realtor checked with some other loan people and gave me a bunch of questions to ask this guy now, instead of later this month when we’d have shelled out something like a thousand dollars for inspections and whatnot only to discover that our pre-approval was not, as such, worth shit. Honestly it’s a bit of a relief at this point; we won’t be getting a house this year, but in the meantime at least that part of my life’s not in flux any more. Being in flux is bloody stressful.

Of course, the other reason I didn’t write was because I was running Kat a two-hour gaming session for five hours. Whoops.

So, day 2 of NaNoWriMo. The most I’ve ever written (in the way of fiction) in a day is something in the vicinity of 2000 words. I don’t know the exact count, but I know it wasn’t more than about 2400 or so. Well, I’m pretty sure*. So I could have just aimed for my new daily goal, which was about fifty  words higher than before, and try to keep that up. Or, I could try to write both days’ worth, a whopping 3334 words. I opted for the latter.

Today’s word count: 3508 words on This Novel Will Fail. I’m not going to lie. I’m a little impressed with myself. This is in spite of the fact that I actually only had about 250 words done by noon today, but Kat went into support-a-struggling-writer overdrive and provided me with sandwiches and coffee while I wrote. Also, my local NaNo chapter has an IRC channel, which helped way more than I thought it would. But my wife gets most of the credit by far.

Other November progress:

I read a book. And a half. Yes, they were manga (sort of – I’m rereading my Megatokyo volumes.) Yes, that counts. I make the rules here.

I did not get any game design done. I would feel shame, if I was capable of such emotion at the moment. Instead, I feel a sense of pride that I wrote 3500 bloody words today.

I successfully continued to be Summer’s dad today. She was with her great-grandparents for most of the day, but then we went and had her second birthday party. Then I came home and wrote the last 1000 words or so.

I did not look for, obtain, or work at a job. Again: 3500 words. I’m counting it as my day off.

So . . . November’s itinerary hasn’t changed that much, but between not worrying about getting a house and having my lifetime-record-best writing day, I actually feel quite good. Also sleepy.

Good night.


*I didn’t find a blog post detailing said record high like I thought I would, but I did find out that I apparently tried NaNoWriMo back in ’09, right after moving and having a kid, while I was starting a new job. What, was I high or something? The reason I didn’t remember this is probably because it went nowhere.

November: A Month for Relaxation

Tuesday, November 1st, 2011

Today begins NaNoWriMo, which I have decided to participate in this year. Crazy, I know. I’ve been working a lot on Zosias lately, mainly with my friend Pip (more on that later). I’m also still working on Derelict, though I’ve moved it to the back burner for now; most of my daily writing has been on Zosias, with adjustments made for the fact that word count is a really bad way to track game design. Kat and I are also looking into buying a house, and we’ve collectively decided that I should look into a part-time/night-shift job for a while. So tentatively November looks like this:

  • *Write about 1667 words per day on a new project. This conveniently takes care of my “write 1000 words/day” goal quite conveniently, as well as my daily task to write 500 words of prose, anywhere, on anything (which is strictly speaking part of the word goal anyway). I’ve got about four different ideas for this book, and will hopefully have settled on one by the time I start writing later today. Regardless of which one I pick, the working title is “This Novel Will Fail,” because it amuses me to attempt to employ reverse psychology. The reason I find reverse psychology so funny is probably because I learned about it from Bugs Bunny.
  • Write about 500 words or one chunk of game design, story background, campaign notes/plans, or whatever. This is a complete non-issue. As far as I can tell, I don’t get writer’s block on game design. This is probably at least partially due to the fact that the Zosias design team consists of four people, we have several fantastic friends who regularly playtest, and I’m involved in about two and a half Zosias campaigns right now. (One I run for my wife, one my wife runs for me, and one I’m in the planning stages of.) It’s hard to sit through an entire gaming session without running across three or four parts of the rules that could do with addition, expansion, or change.
  • Read a book every 2 days. I haven’t blogged about this goal, and it’s not a super-important one, but the reasoning goes something like this: I like to read. I set myself a goal, roughly via Shelfari, of reading a hundred books this year. I’m way behind. If I read a book every two days until the end of the year, I’ll be almost caught up*.
  • Obtain a house. Or continue the process thereof.
  • Look for/work at a job. We’ve decided that it would be a good idea for me to get at least a part-time job for a while, not least because we anticipate unexpected expenses once we have a house. Plus: We’re making it pretty well on Kat’s income, which means that whatever I bring in is pretty much extra. This will likely go toward frivolous expenses such as savings and paying off old medical debts. There are at least half a dozen ways the schedule could play out here, but one thing’s for sure: I’m probably going to have to adjust my sleep schedule again. Silly me.
  • Continue being Summer’s dad. Obviously I won’t be an entirely stay-at-home dad any more, but I’ll still be the primary go-to parent. See, I can put some of my stuff aside for awhile if I need to. If I miss a week on the novel, well, it’s nothing  that hasn’t happened before. Kat’s going to school online right now, and I gather they’re a little less understanding about missing weeks.

Luckily, being Summer’s dad isn’t usually all that grueling. Sure, sometimes it involves convincing her to sleep when she’s convinced the bed is made of hot needles. But sometimes it only involves reading her one of her favorite books twenty-seven times over the course of an hour. And sometimes, we sit down and watch the 90s Spider-Man cartoons together. She loves those**.


*It’s a good thing this is a self-imposed goal, because I can define “book” however makes me happy, and sometimes when I’m busy it makes me happy to count each book of a manga or something. I’ve been meaning to read the Rozen Maiden manga, and I wouldn’t mind rereading the Megatokyo books and/or the Chrno Crusade manga.

**So do I.

 

Writing-Related Schedule Adjustments

Saturday, September 24th, 2011

Now that I’m mostly adjusted to my new sleep schedule of getting up at 4:30 (and, more importantly, staying up), it’s about time for me to take the next step in my nefarious plan. (Sorry, self. I should have warned you there was a nefarious plan involved.)

John Scalzi recently decided to stay off the internet until after noon or 2000 words of pay copy, whichever comes first. (By “recently” I apparently mean “Holy crap, that was all the way back in January? Where did the time go?”) I thought this was a brilliant plan at the time, and still do, but until recently my ability to adopt something similar has been dramatically crippled by my general state of non-sapience prior to noon.

But no more!

I’m about as adapted to a morning schedule as I’m likely to get any time soon, and I have summarily used this morning free time to do some amazing things. I now occasionally answer emails. I finally finished Campbell’s The Hero With A Thousand Faces. I started using Remember The Milk, which I still need to mention at some point. But I haven’t gotten around to using this time for its original intended purpose: writing.

Hence, for the foreseeable future– assuming no significant failures of self-control on my part– I’m going to be staying clear of most of the Internet until noon or 1000* words on Thursday-Monday**. So I guess I’m going to go do that now.


*Historically speaking, 1000 words is very reachable for me when I get a few hours to write and am not completely blocked. I strongly suspect that I’ll be able to pull closer to 2k when I get into the rhythm; time will tell. (I actually need to average about 1700/day to hit my current target for draft 3, but a lot of those words will be scenes I’ve already written imported from draft 2 and tweaked to fit.)

**Tuesday and Wednesday are my Saturday and Sunday, being the days Kat has off right now.


Current music: Seven Nation Army by The White Stripes, via Pandora. Turns out this is great music for waking up in the morning. (On a related note, I love the new Pandora interface. Anyone else have thoughts on it?)

Calendars in Derelict

Sunday, September 18th, 2011

I’m currently starting on the third draft of Derelict. It’s going to be another major rewrite, but I’ve got a pretty good idea where it’s going this time around. Before I get started in earnest, though, I’ve been going through my personal wiki for the setting and doing some housework. (It needed it.)

Other than clearing out the spiders from the corners where stuff the wiki said was no longer true (sometimes drastically so), I’m taking the opportunity to flesh out parts of the setting I haven’t worried much about yet. For example: Here, have a calendar system!

Common Year notation (cy) counts regularized historic years from the founding of the Federation.

Old Dynastic Calendar (aka Dynastic Decimal Calendar)
The Old Dynastic Calendar was commonly used for timekeeping during the Sheighdon Dynasty. The Dynastic calendar uses Standard days, but works up and down decimally. Each day lasted ten hours of 100 minutes each; months were ten days long, years 100 days. Period notation put dates as (for example) 1102.32 dyn or -34.81 dyn. Modern notation sometimes uses the notation 1102.32 .d or -34.81 .d to further differentiate dates using the decimal calendar from those using the standardized calendar.

Standard Dynastic Calendar
One of the many changes made by the Song Edict was the standardization of the dynastic calendar, in order to better facilitate trade with areas outside the dynasty.

The Song Edict was issued on 2688.51 dyn, and declared that from then on the Dynasty would use Standard years of 365 days. 2688.51 dyn was declared to be March 5, 2688 dyn by the new calendar. As such, in contemporary writings, years before 2688 were 100 days long; years after 2688 were 365 days long; and 2688 itself was 352 days long.

Widespread adoption throughout the failing Sheighdon Dynasty was swift, particularly since many areas had used a Standard calendar in trade with areas outside the Dynasty. The Standard Dynastic Calendar remained the primary calendar for over a thousand years after the fall of the Sheighdon Dynasty, particularly in the Far Rim and other areas touched by the Sheighdon Expansion, and continued popular use into the 300s cy. It remains of great importance today, as it was the calendar followed by Kaeb and used in his works.

The old Dynastic year survived through most of the Expansion as a measure of time, eventually coming to be called simply a “dynasty;” while originally indicating a period of 100 days, the term had degraded to a period of “about three months” by the 3400s dyn and mostly disappeared from the common parlance by the 3700s dyn.

Common Year Calendar
The foundation of the Federation in 4155 dyn included the declaration of a new calendar, the Common Year calendar. For simplicity’s sake the official declaration of the Federation took place on the first day of the new year, and the Common Year calendar officially picks up seamlessly from the Standard Dynastic calendar; December 31, 4154 dyn is followed by Song 1, 0 cy. In modern times the Dynastic calendar is no longer used for date notation except in historical contexts, being replaced by the simpler -40 cy notation.

And now you know. Comments are welcome – this isn’t set in stone.

Apropos of nothing

Saturday, December 11th, 2010

Though it hasn’t been used since BC,
It’s time now to learn how to CC.
If you break all my traps
So the mobs don’t take naps
There’s a chance that I might fake a DC.

-Erich T. Wade

Sans signature, this is now my dungeon macro.

I’m not an outline writer, honest!

Monday, November 29th, 2010

It occurs to me that yesterday’s Daily Lynx post might have given someone the horribly erroneous idea that I’m an outline writer.  I have nothing against outline writers; I’m sure they’re very nice people.  Indeed, I have nothing against being mistaken for one, but I felt like talking about my relationship with outlines.

In my experience, I flat-out can’t write from an outline — certainly not the first draft.  Derelict has an outline, but I cobbled it together after the fact: it’s a tool used mainly for revision.  The first draft was entirely discovery-written.  Then  I looked at the story I had, put together a rough outline of how it was, and used the outline to start working on high-level story changes before letting them propagate down.

That said, I’m planning on putting together an outline ahead of time for my next major project, currently operating under the name Wings to Chase These Dreams (or Wings if I don’t hate my fingers at the moment).  Part of this is due to the unnecessarily complex structure I’m messing with for it, but part of it is just to try writing from an outline.

Current music: A playlist featuring Flyleaf and Panic! at the Disco.

The Daily Lynx 11/28/2010

Monday, November 29th, 2010

[Insert drawing of a lynx with a monocle here]

I don’t want to admit how many RSS feeds I watch on Google Reader, but suffice to say it’s more than two and less than aleph-null.  Given how many interesting things I run across, I have decided to start a semi-regular link aggregation here.  Pay no attention to the purported daily nature of this lynx: he’s got delusions of grandeur.

SMBC has a message for science journalists. Yes.  Please.  That.

Here is a fairly awesome music video, made even more awesome by the apparent fact that it was filmed in one take. (via Shamus Young)

(Warning: Contains some NSFW language.) Blag Hag weighs in on the relationship between feminism and sexiness. These are very important points, given how frequently they seem to be forgotten.  TL;DR: Feminism is (or should be) about letting women choose what they want, not forcing them to avoid traditional roles.

(Warning: Probably not for the snake-phobic.) Something about the Pentagon and snakes, but I’m mostly interested in the video of a flying snake.  I’ve heard of those fellas, but never seen one in action.  Very nifty.

(Warning: Not for those trying to avoid Minecraft addiction.) Mojang has a bug tracker now!  Crazy.  It even tracks solved problems!

In other news, I might be doing some blog maintenance soon.  Getting a non-default WordPress theme, cleaning up my schizophrenic tag usage, that sort of thing.  Please imagine an emphasis on “might.”

Today’s writing progress (Derelict): -1 words.  Today was almost pure revision: some scenes were moved around, an outline was updated, and several scenes in Part 1 were partially rewritten to accommodate some major changes to the plot there.  (Outlines are not reflected in word count.)

Today’s writing progress (secret project):  What secret project?  I don’t know what you’re talking about.

Current music: Rogue by Incubus.  I’ve got Light Grenades on a playlist with Within Temptation, Muse, and Flyleaf albums, set to randomize.

Current novelin’ plans

Friday, September 3rd, 2010

My current goal for Derelict is to finish it by year’s end.  Not just “I have a complete draft,” but “I have a complete draft that has been through several revisions and is now in good enough shape for me to start submissions while working on my next book.”

In some ways, I’m scarily close.  90K words  written, and over the past couple of weeks I’ve basically hashed out the ending — which has been the main hang-up for the last, oh, year or so.  Of course the ending I’m going with means that most of the beginning, after first couple of chapters, gets to be yanked out and sent to the chop shop, where any usable parts will be sold to the highest-bidding chapters.  But I digress.

It is worth noting that, in other ways, I am scarily not close.  Most of the book is going to receive a pretty harsh shuffling; there will be many casualties among the scenes currently written, a lot of stuff needs to be rewritten, and some things I’ll just have to see when I get there.  I think four months will do the trick, though.

Writing Again

Saturday, June 12th, 2010

Let it be known that, at 89,110 words, I am shutting the current draft of Derelict down and doing a ground-up rewrite.  (Oh, and I think I’m over my writer’s block.)

I don’t like to blog about writer’s block when I have it.  It’s almost like writer’s block is some sort of shameful thing which, if I was a REAL writer, I’d be able to overcome.  (To some extent this is the case.  Being a professional means having deadlines, and staying a professional means keeping them.)

I’ve been blocked pretty bad on Derelict for a while now.  I’m not anymore.  Part of this is that I now have a decent laptop on which to write, meaning I can write wherever the flip I want.  Part of this is that I’ve started working on other projects I have in my head.  You’d think working on three completely different books at once would mean that I’m getting less done on the main project, but in this instance that’s not the case.  (Mostly because anything > 0.  Results may vary when I finish being not blocked.)  Another part of me being un-blocked is that I had a nice chat with my sister-in-law on the topic of writing, and that got me thinking about it again.  (I wrote about a thousand words that night for the first time in months.  Yay.)

What finally fully unblocked me, though, is a product of my becoming partially unblocked.  Digging through the document again, I’ve come to the conclusion that Derelict needs a much larger rewrite than I was originally planning.  Simply put, I’m gutting the oldest parts of the plot.  The characters and core idea of the original short story are being carried forward; the plot, which I’ve been trying to make into the plot of the first part of the novel, isn’t.  It just doesn’t fit anymore.

So, today I’m starting a new file for Derelict.  This file currently contains — hang on, lemme count — yeah.  This file currently contains zero words.  I am going to rebuild Derelict in it, and it will grow quickly at first; I would guess that somewhere around 60% of the old document will fit into the new one with a minimum of rewriting (albeit some significant rearranging).  Some scenes will have to be discarded entirely.  (Some scenes I was pretty sure I was going to discard when I wrote them, but that’s the nature of the beast.)  There will be quite a lot to write anew, but I’m looking forward to it.